Desolate Stars

Desolate Stars

by bubbleduck

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Human civilisation has at last settled into their place in the galaxy. Trade flourishes and civilisation resurges. Technology is finally catching up to the wonders of days bygone. But that’s only on the surface. Humanity is always a little uglier beneath the skin. A life among the stars. Travelling. Seeing new sights. Is it a good life? Is it a bad life? That depends. Because usually it isn’t that simple. And it’s never the stars you have to watch out for, it’s the people around you.

Kik is soon shoved into a position he has no choice but to take. He’s just a tool in the great game of galactic politics. But every tool has their uses, and this particular tool has his own will. This is a science fiction adventure story. I’m attempting to go with gritty realism.

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It's quite interesting. Kept me captivated, really enjoyed it. I feel bad for the parents though. The kid seems to be coping too well, in my opinion. It's not his ability to take action in the moment, but rather his emotional control. Kids usually aren't that controlled in their behaviors. I'm assuming he is a child though. I didn't seen an age specified.